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李华又回来了！6月8日下午，2023年北京高考英语科目考试结束。今年英语作文中，李华又一次成为作文中的“主角”。我们实测下文心一言、通义千问、讯飞星火做高考作文题怎么样？看看AI助手对英语教学有没有什么帮助。

第二节（20分）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim 正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：

1.活动形式；

2.活动内容。

注意：1.词数 100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

解题思路：

首先，根据题目中的提示，确定主题为“绿色北京”。

然后，根据主题提出两个主要建议：活动形式和活动内容。

对于活动形式，可以考虑采用主题演讲或工作坊的形式，以帮助参与者更好地理解“绿色北京”的概念和环保的重要性。

对于活动内容，可以安排一些实际的活动，如植树、收集废纸和清理公园等，这些活动不仅可以加深参与者对主题的理解，而且可以让他们采取实际行动为环境做出贡献。

最后，总结和建议，表达对对方社团活动的期待和祝福。

谋篇布局：

引言：首先，可以简要介绍绿色北京的概念和环保的重要性，从而引出本次社团活动的主题。

主体：接着，提出两个主要建议，即活动形式和活动内容。对于活动形式，可以列举主题演讲或工作坊等形式，以帮助参与者更好地理解主题和环保的重要性。对于活动内容，可以列举一些实际的活动，如植树、收集废纸和清理公园等，这些活动可以让参与者采取实际行动为环境做出贡献。

结尾：最后，可以总结和建议，表达对对方社团活动的期待和祝福。

迅速成文：（129字）

Dear Jim,

Im glad to hear that youre planning a green club activity in Beijing. Here are some suggestions for the format and content of the event.

Firstly, we can organize a clean-up campaign in a local park or on the streets. Participants can bring their own gloves and trash bags, and work together to pick up litter and plant trees. This will not only improve the environment but also promote teamwork and community spirit.

Secondly, we can hold a seminar on environmental protection and sustainable development. Experts in this field can share their knowledge and experiences with us, and we can discuss how to reduce waste, conserve energy and protect biodiversity in our daily lives.

Hope these ideas are helpful. Looking forward to seeing you soon!

Best regards,

Li Hua

引入话题：用一个简单的开头引入话题，比如“Dear Jim，”“Thanks for your email，”等。

给出建议：根据题目中的要求，给出两种社团活动的形式和内容，并且给出这些活动的意义和目的。注意，在给出建议的过程中，要结合具体的事实和数据，让读者更加信服。

总结全文：用一些简单的话语总结全文，比如“I hope these suggestions are helpful. Let me know if you have any other questions.”这样可以让读者感受到你的真诚和诚意。

谋篇布局：无

迅速成文：174字

Dear Jim,

Thanks for your email. Here are my suggestions for the “Green Beijing” campaign.

The format of the campaign could be a poster campaign or a street performance. You could make posters with information about the importance of protecting the environment and ways to do so, and then distribute them around the city. Alternatively, you could perform a skit or a play that highlights the problems facing Beijings environment and suggests ways to solve them.

The content of the campaign could include information about the air, water, and soil pollution in Beijing, as well as the effects of these problems on the environment and human health. You could also highlight some of the governments initiatives to address these issues and encourage people to get involved in protecting the environment. Additionally, you could discuss ways for individuals to make a difference in their daily lives, such as using public transportation, recycling, and reducing their energy consumption.

I hope these suggestions are helpful. Let me know if you have any other questions.

Best regards,

Li Hua

讯飞星火

解题思路：无

谋篇布局：无

迅速成文：128字

Dear Jim,

Its great to hear that youre planning a green club activity at your school in the UK. As for my suggestions, I think it would be best to organize a clean-up campaign in one of Beijings parks or nature reserves. This would involve picking up litter and educating people about the importance of environmental protection. We could also plant some trees or flowers to make the area more beautiful and sustainable.

In addition, we could hold a workshop on green living, where we could discuss ways to reduce waste and energy consumption, such as recycling and using renewable energy sources. It will be a fun and informative day, and I hope it will inspire others to take action for a better environment.

Best regards,

Li Hua

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